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19. I Think I'm On the Edge of Something New With You
8 reviewsin which Molly gets hit over the head with a proverbial brick and Elyse spells it out for our heroine slowly in case she isn't as quick as we all thought she was. In which Patrick again proves that...
4Exciting
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Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) duckapple 2007-01-09
I..erm...
Babies.
Thats all that can be said.Author's response
but of course. :)Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) getup_n_go 2007-01-09
dude, wtf? its always the blondes and it always the Wentz.
but, come one. He kicked serious ass.Author's response
lol. yup. blondes are the bane of my existance. jk.
and yet peter pan kicked some serious ass. like i said, I might even really like him again--which might fuck up my writing sooo....contemplatesWould You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-01-09
NOO!!! This Allison character is a slut. ha.
I really like the way you write. You give just enough detail to keep me interested, but not so much that it is needless.Author's response
lol yes she is. unfortunatly she's also stereotypically hot and patrick is 16 and male and hormonal. do the math.
thanks for the compliment, I'm always afraid I get too detailed.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Subs 2007-01-09
Allison the slut :P
16 year old boys tend to think with one thing.. and thats not there brain...
BLAH!
Anyways good chapter, I enjoy your updates immensly.So more soon ok?
ok coolAuthor's response
yup. more soon. and yea Allison the slut. I had to create some drama..like I didn't have enough?Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-09
Patrick bending over must be hot. Especially in his younger years. Ahem. ;) Poor, poor Molly. But if it helps at all, most kids on here suffer from the same disease.
Also, I would like to point out that my cats and guinea pigs are my only conversation partners. Nuttin' wrong with that.
A lovely chapter. Very funny. But I had to rate "exciting" because of the whole PattyCakes-Alli thing. I am on pins and needles.Author's response
I'd like to state that I have seen the younger patrick bend over. uhhh....dies yea. its that pretty.
I talk to my stuffed animals as I have no alive ones to converse with. I think what I do is even weirder. lol.
Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) xloveorsympathy 2007-01-09
oh no.
not this again.
whats up with young men?
rawr. hormones ( shakes head)
another great chapter :)
"Its PattyCakes. He is not sexy. hot. snuggleable. or any other adjective that could lead to thoughts of undress...AH!".
haha loved it :PAuthor's response
let the record show that I totally disagree with Molly when she made that statement. Just want to make sure all my readers know I'm not crazy lolWould You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) jessiearei 2007-01-09
oh snap.
poor molly!
patrick needs to forget about allison! for sure!
haha update again soon!Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) MMMramen 2007-01-15
oooooh, I just got my rating points for the week and I'm giving you the amazing honor of receiving my first point. Well, it's not really that big of an honor...just let me think it is. Anyway, I knew Molly would come around. That Patrick, he's getting all the Ficwad ladies. And this Alli...I want her dead. Now.
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