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Confusion: Freeverse
1 reviewA poem on love's confusion. I have another one titled "Confusion" which was written around the same time as this one, but this one was written in freeverse.
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Confusion: Freeverse
(#) fruit_addict 2007-01-26
wow. Sure summed up how I feel. Like I said on my review on your other poem I think the dot dot dot didn't completely fit in.Author's response
Thanks. As for the ellipsis, I don't know how you felt it didn't fit in, but I'll see about their use in my future poems. :)
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