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The Mistake
(#) whatkatydid 2007-01-11
YOU! points ARE AMAZING!
MORE DAMNIT! MORE MORE!!!Author's response
Oh la la. Love points! thanx :DThe Mistake
(#) riaryder 2007-01-11
AAAAAHHHHH!
That's what I shouted when I saw you had updated.
And it was totally worth the wait.
Damn that sexy Patrick and his insecurities. You know you get a point, right? Bring on the lurve!Author's response
Yay! Love the points! I'm trying to get back in the habit of writing on some form of schedule, so hopefully a long break won't happen again.The Mistake
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-11
Patrick's lucky he's such a sexy schmuck. I mean Matthew... COME ON! (At least I hope so.)
I was so excited to see you update! This is one of the best-written stories ever. :)Author's response
hmm... yes, Matthew... Anyway, glad you think it's so good. You all do wonders for my ego.The Mistake
(#) luckysgc921 2007-01-11
great chapter. and don't worry about it being short. patrick's short so it all even's out.
/ "Listen, I have to go do a few band things. Some kids won some sort of backstage passes or something and were promised some form of actual interaction with us, so..."/-->i just have to say with as much as this happens in fanfic i'd like to recieve these passes at some point in my life. kthanx.
Ava is blind to the fact that Matthew wants into her pants isn't she? wow. At least Patrick is aware and will protect what he has tracked and hunted...and I'll stop now.
great chapter.Author's response
Hmm, I would love to recieve one as well. I don't actually know if they really exist or not (though I hope so), but that was the best I could do at four in the morning. ;)The Mistake
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-01-11
omg amazing!!
poor Ava, with Patrick being all suspicious...
great update!!
cant wait for the next one!The Mistake
(#) Frenchie189 2007-01-11
oh my gosh. i love this story it is amazing! update soon please?The Mistake
(#) CoraLiz 2007-01-17
I'm still mad you got to go to D.C. without me. I'm over hearing about all the amazing things you did. I'm only sorry you had to leave NY without seeing MCR, but I guress that's just what you get for leaving me in TN. So I'm not leaving a happy review for you. I'm still jealous.
But I still want to read the other chapters!Author's response
You should have saved your money for a plane ticket!!!The Mistake
(#) valleygal208 2007-02-04
amazing.
"Crushed his lips against hers"...totally orgasmicAuthor's response
I fully agreeThe Mistake
(#) ssketchator 2007-06-01
I'm glad Ava finally stood up for her relationship with Matthew.
And I'm glad Patrick finally had some vulnerable time, when he was insecure and nervous. He's so precious.
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