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In which Ollie once again tries to lose herself, Link has an interesting train journey and several people collide....
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A Chance Acquaintance
(#) whatkatydid 2007-01-11
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Full circles are great - I love to dance in the middle of them!
Great update, if you leave it that long again next time - I will force feed you my home made cookies....Author's response
I'm presuming that these home made cookies will contain some sort of poison? Because im actually a fan of cookies so unless theyre insanely foul tasting i'd probably still eat them, unless your plan is to force feed my cookies till i explode....although would possibly defeat the object of the threat...okay lets stop as i could go on for ages with this! Thanks for the review! I was doing a vistory dance all round my room when i finally finished this i can tell you. XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) riaryder 2007-01-11
Hurray! They meet at last!
Loved the constantly changing POV, getting the story from all angles.
And for a moment there, I thought you were going to make them miss each other.
Still totally in love with this story, but the threat stands about tying you up unless you update again soon :-)
Oh, yeah and have a point xAuthor's response
thanks for the point! Though can i just say, whats with you people and threats lately! whatkatydid just threatened to force feed me cookies! haha though i have to admit threats to tend to work for me!
I did think about having them just pass by each other but then i thought actually no, even i'm fed up of all the pussy footing around! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) luckysgc921 2007-01-11
awe.
just a bit ol' awe. I knew they were going to crash head first into each other. and they really do deserve each other--now maybe they're self obsesededness (is that a word?) will cancel each other out? lol great chapter. great story. have a point.Author's response
Haha someone has finally commented on how self obssessed they both are! Love it! Pete surely wouldnt react any other way!? Haha! Either they will cancel each other out or become so self absorbed that the world will implode! Thanks for the point! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-01-11
whooohoo! gracious, finally an update! and a freakin GREAT one!Author's response
Hehe yes i know! An update at last. The shame was too much i had to update! Thanks for the review! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-11
"Snap out of it man the fans are starting to notice. Music now, Ollie later." Joe hissed at me as he strode back across the stage. -> I love Joe. He’s such a professional. sighs Professionally rude, too.
Ach, poor Logan. And he’s such a cutie, really.
Ha ha, Ollie is so desperate and self-loathing. I gotta love her.
Your vocabulary and general narration skills always overwhelm me. looks like a fool And HOW do you manage to portray so many characters so meticulously?
Pete’s well definied muscles. Yup, I have to give that to him.
Have a point. Have all my points. Have my left leg. For Ollie.
Amazing. :)Author's response
Everyone loves Joe now! I think it's like a plague, eventually it will consume us all. Ollie probably wont be self loathing too much anymore, not if she finally gets some! Ah the many POV's yes...well...they tend to make me wanna hit something but i love them all the same! Thank you for the review, my assignments dont seem quite so bad anymore! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) duckapple 2007-01-11
We should adopt small furry animals.
Sorry, babies are just so 06'.Author's response
Haha, you seriously crack me up! My choice of animal though right?! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) killxsmile 2007-01-11
Amazing, as usual.Author's response
Thank you! Glad you liked....part 8 on it's way soon! Xx
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