- 'No matter how much you think you love someone, you will always step back when the pool of their blood edges too close.'
That was deep.
In fact, this entire chapter was deep.
It gave me chills, but then again, that just might be me, still sick.
Either way, I am so reaking in love with this story.
Author's responseI know, I love that phrase. It' is actually from a book called invisible monsters. amazing book, really. And I loved this chapter. Its my longest so far, and the one im most proud of. And you sick again? Awwh. I would hug you, but I cant. Virtual hug Heh. Thank you Evv-ee. I love your stories too. (But I love you more. SQUEE!)
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-01-11YES!! she's together with pete!!
but she's going to rehab...
i loved the flashback thing you did with the memories of the night her mom died and then the whole present thing with Pete... amazing :D
Author's responseYeah, I thought I better do that before she left. And thank you, the whole flashback thing made me very proud of myself. Teehee. Thank you for the point, and the review! Means a lot. Loves!
- Spectacularly good flashbacks. Give yourself a big pat on the back for pulling that off.
Lovely, moving stuff. Have a point.
Author's responseI'm actually suprised I pulled that off. I thought maybe people wouldn't understand it. But yeah, I'm patting myself on the back. :] Thank you, Ri-ri. (Hehe)
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2007-01-11Awww....that was cute and really sad at the same time. But I'm glad Tay made the right decision.
Author's responseMe too. Heh, (Even though i'm writing it...) Lol. But yeah, she'll have a lot of problems and obstacles to overcome. Keep reading! :]
(#) prettypoizon 2007-01-11Wow...that was really emotional. I don't know if I'm crying because of the chapter or because my mum is chopping onions for dinner...but I really think it's the chapter ^^ Maybe the onions helped...=/ Good job, though ^^
Author's responseOnions are evil. I threw one at my sister once. (Longgg time ago) And it hit her on the head. Woo.. Heh. Thank you Lex. Your reviews make me smile :]
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-12Ha, glad I could be the fifth person to rate this literary goodness.
The whole jumping to the past and back to the present (or rather not to long-gone past) created perfect ambiance and a deeper insight into Tay's world. Kudos with pegacorns on top.
It just goes to show that you are a very talented and sensitive writer and you will go a long way, probably not only on ficwad. :)
Thank you for the reference. It bordered on being "izzy". ;)
Author's responseSQUEE! I love your reviews moose. (You realise i'll be calling you that permanantly from now on.) The jumping back and forward was risky for me, I didn't know wether it would cause confusion or not. Obviously it came across well, and I'm glad it did. I worked hard on that. :] And thank you. It's nice to know that people think I have talent. And I do plan on writing in the future, just to keep my mind working. It should be good. And you are welcome. I didn't know how to reference you, so I reference your amazing wiggie/alex country instead. :]
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