the difference between Seimei and Ritsuka - 31_days, 'I am inside soemone who hates me'
That was beautiful. I love your emphasis on Ritsuka's ears as a means of showing emotion. And Soubi's thoughts... especially that very last line, rang very true. Great job!
(#) Katya 2006-01-29
Wow. I really enjoyed this. I like it when people can get into the characters minds properly. This is a nice change.
It really made me think, and I love how... Oddly peaceful it was.
(#) facia 2007-04-12
Lovely. Butterflies and cats.
Your contrast between Ritsuka and Seimei was both poetic and clear, and truly suited to the characters themselves while sounding perfectly like Soubi's thoughts.
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