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• The Battle of Dumbledore's Army

  (#) Particle_Accelerator 2007-01-16

  corrections: lingerie, horcrux(es)
  Comments: A horcrux is a very secret, very taboo piece of dark arts. No way is it common knowledge, nor would the Ministry allow knowledge of such to be disseminated. The DA wouldn't know until Ron & Hermione let them in on it. Hermione suddenly becoming "all girly-girl" with the make-up is odd. Ron & Hermione would be more distraught if Harry was out there alone. They seem almost flippant.
  Questions: Is this a Harry/Hermione piece? Why isn't Hermione Head Girl?
  
  Overall grade: B

• The Battle of Dumbledore's Army

  (#) xkashi_queenx 2007-01-17

  Thanks for your support!
  
  No, Hermione isn't Head Girl in my story. She deserves it right?
  I thought that Hermione and Ron were already distraught. Hmmm.
  
  The purpose of Hermone, Ron and Ginny telling about what they know is significant to my plot that I have. You'll see! :-)

• The Battle of Dumbledore's Army

  (#) RekoM 2007-01-18

  I enjoyed the story very much. I also agree with accelarator(sp) that Hermione with her make-up is kind of odd. But i still liked how it played into the story. Good Job!
  
  P.S
  Thanks for the tips!

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