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This Curse on Your Lips
(#) _stfu 2007-01-16
nah you didn't over do it.
i love your story.
ny fav. by far =]Author's response
yay! thanks! haha and i love your name! hehe. cracks me up.This Curse on Your Lips
(#) _stfu 2007-01-16
nah you didn't over do it.
i love your story.
ny fav. by far =]This Curse on Your Lips
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-16
At first I thought the lyric references in the dialog were a bit too much. BUT since they aren't actual lyrics at the time they're using them it's totally ok, I think. ;)
And the whole thing being an inspiration for Pete to write: super! :)Author's response
yeah. he's using the argument as influence for the new record. yeah. haha.This Curse on Your Lips
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-01-17
loved the lyrics added into the sentenses :)
love this story so much!!
update soon!!Author's response
thanks! your amazing! haha.This Curse on Your Lips
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-01-17
wow i loved how used the lyrics that is so cool! muters to self why couldn't I have thought of that....ahem but anyhoo....i love how optimistic Patrick is about the whole situation. it made me giggle even though i'd prolly prefer Patty Cakes as a brother:S ah well....keep up the good work can't wait for the next bit!!!Author's response
haha thank you! i'm going to post another chappy tomorrow but then i wont be able to update til sunday maybe. were sposed to be getting a big snow storm. blah. haha.
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