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• Wonderful scent

  (#) gucci84 2007-01-17

  NICE the perfume Gucci is in there Does a 'yay' dance
  
  Nice story idea. Very very nice. I loved the whole 'scent can trigger feelings' hehehe.
  
  Good job. As a reviewer I'd say that when ever you have dialogue, put a space before and after so that it's easier on the eyes. That is all.
  
  Update soon.

• Wonderful scent

  (#) divachick34 2007-01-17

  okay i love it but please dont wait so long to update next time

• Wonderful scent

  (#) divachick34 2007-01-17

  okay i love it but please dont wait so long to update next time

• Wonderful scent

  (#) divachick34 2007-01-17

  okay i love it but please dont wait so long to update next time

• Wonderful scent

  (#) divachick34 2007-01-17

  okay i love it but please dont wait so long to update next time

• Wonderful scent

  (#) panda_1418 2007-01-17

  yay, an update! I agree with Gucci, spaces would make it easier to read, but otherwise, awesome story idea. Update soon!

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