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in which our star crossed lovers deal with the dreaded morning after scenario.
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Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) duckapple 2007-01-19
I...err...Ugh.
If I didn't love you so much, I might despise you for that ending.
You're lucky missy.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Subs 2007-01-19
Sincere apologies for the lack of reviews...things have been hectic..I just came back to Australia the other day...the story has progressed beautifully, and I love the confusion that both Patrick and Molly are dealing with..it makes it soo much more realistic. The aftermath of the two fooling around, and it not beeing pure bliss, rather an awkward situation is also very realistic rather than the "hey lets be in love and happily ever after" Great Job...Update soonAuthor's response
Australia?! I do not know if it is possible to convey how utterly jealous I am right now. I've wanted to go there since I was about 15 years old.
Yea, I didn't want things to be all sunshine and rainbows for Patrick and Molly. Real life doesn't work out that way, and as a writer I pride myself on not being typical and letting things just happen for the sake of happening. I try and be at least a little realistic, fanfiction or not.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) MMMramen 2007-01-19
HA! I caught you! victory dance
Well, that was eventful. That Patrick. You'd think with a head that big, he'd be smarter. But I think he's going to redeem himself soon. I can feel it. Oh, and I have one problem.
It's so annoying that she has to use two different knives and a spoon to make peanut butter and jelly. What's wrong with that? Who wants to get jelly into the peanut butter jar and vice versa? Hmmm? No one, that's who. Despite that, I'll still give you a rating point because I can.Author's response
lol. maybe i should have disclaimed this with "the opinions of hatracks do not necessarily reflect that of the author"
Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-19
Hey, if guys don't screw up how could they prove how sweet their really by making it up?
Even though... Patrick was really pretty cold-hearted by throwing her out like that. But Molly could cope and she knew he was just being a coward. So I will forgive him.
I chuckled at your sex remark in your last author's response. ;)Author's response
Patrick was a boy. They do stupid stuff, its not necessarily on purpose so its not cold hearted. Patrick's waking up scene got cut but it went something like this.
'oh shit oh shit oh shit' That was all Patrick could think as he looked down at his very naked best friend lying next to him. The ringing of his cell phone startled him out of his thoughts. Climbing quickly out of bed and grabbing the phone he winced when he saw it was MOM. "Hello?""Hey cupcake. How was your right?""oh...it was. good. I umm..suppose.""Did you do anything interesting." 'oh yea.'"No, not really.""Oh, ok. Well your dad and I just left so we should be home in an hour or so.""Ok. Love you. Drive safe.""Love you too darling." After Patrick hung up with his mother he put his hands over his face and resisted the urge to scream in panic. Grabbing the first jeans, boxers, and t-shirt he found, which just happened to be from his laundry pile he headed downstairs to try and figure out what the hell he was going to do now.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-01-19
i just read through your whole story and i love it, i can't wait for more.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-01-19
Yay! Something Corporate!!
I could smack Patrick for being an idiot, but I think I've slapped him enough lately. He's figured it out! Good for him, he deserves a cookie. So now I just have to figure out what's in the lounge. I bet Patrick did something uber romantic for her!! Or so I would like to think. But maybe she walked in on Elyse and Matt? Oo...the possibilities...Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-01-19
Okay I totally couldn't focus in my class today. Polypeptide what? Guess what my mine was focused on? Yep, your story. Thanks a lot. When I flunk out of college, I'll tell my parents it was your fault..;)Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Frenchie189 2007-01-19
I love it please update soon. I want more!!!Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) xloveorsympathy 2007-01-19
oh gee.
i just read the last er..3 or 4 chapters all together and trust me, its not a good feeling.
having all the eeee-ing and the aweee-ing and all the " patrick your such a stupid ass!" feelings together ;) gives you a weird feeling.lol.
i loved the whole convo between Patrick and Pete.made me laugh :P
tsk tsk boys
keep the aweeeeesome. writing coming
can wait till the next update :D
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