(#) prissynblack 2007-01-19I love your writing detial and style! your so descriptive and thats good. I love love love how you portray brendon in this story! Your a very good writer and I love this story!
Author's responseAw, thanks. I wasn't sure if about the way I made Brendon out to be in my story was believable. I'm glad you like him. God knows I do. LOL.
(#) XOXOshrillexXOXO 2007-01-20I thought he was gonna take advanage...Geez...Damn you brother for coming in and ruining it all. I hope he has to pay for the lamp. I do literally mean that lol. I'm gonna take a wild stab and say that they aren't actually gonna be screwing anytime soon though.
Author's responseI know it was a little 'WTF' for having the brother ruin it all, but I didn't exactly want it to happen then and there exactly. As far as Bren and Raquel hookin' up... I actually was plannin' on writin' it in the next chap. but I'm a little unsure of my writing in that area. LOL. We'll see...
(#) isuckatlifen 2007-01-21aww how cute its like that song by the calling with drew fuller in the music video where ever you will go. great chapter is she leaving for good or just tonight?
Author's responseI've actually never seen that video. Now I'm gonna have to. LOL. Nah, she's just leavin' for the night...though how cute would it be to run away w/ Brendon Urie? :)
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-01-23Quote:/Brendon looked up at me with those puppy-dog eyes from his sitting position on the floor of my closet.
Awe!!!!! That would be sooooooo cute!!!!! Dude...keep this up! its awesome!!!
Author's responseGracias. And yes, that would be cute. Brendon just oozes cuteness. LOL.
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