Categories > Cartoons > Class of the Titans > Savin' Me
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Savin' Me
(#) Always_A_Legend 2007-01-24
Live, DUH!!! i would say maybe, have them to be in life a short term coma period and the boys start opening their hearts and tell their feelings and stuff. i would say have one or two more chapter then end it off. cuz this is getting long and some people may just forget about this story. if it's too short, you don't captivate the audience but if it's too long, you're starting to bore them. anyways, good luck writing the rest of the chappies. email or msg me if you want help. i would gladly give some
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