- dude... i dont care ifm ikes gunna be a bad guy... i wanna own him out ur story!...nd i did notice "i was confused" and was singing it all night nd still cnt get it out my head nd its ur FAULT lol! :) UPDATE
Author's responselmao, well - he aint the good guy of the story! iv started chap 10, is it?, and iv already said u own him, so :D!!!! i will, asap. and lol... doesnt take much to get a song in ur head, does it?
- okidoki dude... rob review special coming up!:
1./"But he was hot as fuck."/... dude.. that really sounds like summit i'd say :)
2. /"Excuse me; you should respect your elders." rotflmfaoJOKE !!!!!!!!!!!!
3. Yeah right; watching Brendon make out with Michelle is always a great laugh./ dunno y... i just have images of u saying tht... in ur head ...duz that make sense? lol
4. "I, er, sorry, fuck... didn't mean... shit... sorry," he mumbled, looking anywhere but at me, before he briskly shut the door, leaving me standing there, bewildered and also frozen still. I snapped out of it and continued getting dressed.
O. M. G.! brendon walked in on her lol coff sum ppl wish that really happens coff :)
5. brenon and ryan kissing should never be forgotten in the fic!
6. "No you didn't, did you? I don't remember you two kissing," Jon butted in. God, he can be so dumb sometimes! VIRTUAL SLAP lol that was so a CRINGE... DUHHHH moment!
7. most guys i know are really CRAP at recoverys 2 !
8. fyi.. HANNIBAL RISING... sucks and edit the well known prequel was "silence of the lambs!" if ya wanted 2 no... shud havegone with constantine 2 in 2009 loool!
9. (I was hoping there was going to be a fire or something so we didn't have to watch it) "vicky" doesnt like horror movies... hu else do i no that doesnt exactly like horror movies...???
10. aww.. brendon witht the arm around comforwt thing.. aww so sweet and subtle flirting to.. a taste of things to come???... let me guesss.. i gotta wait rite? lol
11.( yes... theres an 11!)wens mike coming? i WANT MIKEY! pleeez!!
a special ELEVEN point review ...(well technicallly the last point was a question of stupidity and impatience)BUT STILL... LOL KEEP THE UPDATE GOIN! thnk uuuuuuuuu! luvs ya jj!
Author's responseur reviews always make me laugh, lol. he really is, no joke, and i gues u would say that. uhuh, i thought it was funny. i would say that, cos michelles a bitch! i hav nothing against a girl he wants 2 date that is NICE though. no i REALLY dont wish that would happen, lol. too embarrassin! well, thats the last u'll hear of it, i think! it totally was, right?! o fuck, was that really the prequel?! i didnt realise! ill edit it. yeh, i wonder... twas sweet, and yes, u'll hav 2 wait. o god!!! tell EVERYONE that hes coming back, y dont u?!? u can wait. 11 points, u'll have 2 make 12 next time, lol! wow, that'l be so long. hehe, i shall look forward 2 it! when i post the next 1!!
- hey dude... 12 pts okidoki here we go:
1. ITS MIKE!!! mikety mike mike mike.. my mike... BAD MKE VERY BAD MIKE...and bad siobhan... in my mind... ITS MORE HER FAULT :P... nt mikes as much... she LIEEEDDD... kinda 75/25! and mike duznt "squeak!" lol Siobhan is a superdy-duperty-onehundredpercent-queen-bitch!
2. "What the fuck are you doing? Or should I ask, WHO?!" i luvv dis line... its like sooo me lol.. even though she sed it 2 mike... i still luvs it!
3./"We were on a break," / FRIENDS ross and rachel flashback looolll!!!!wat is it with guys hu fuck around wen ur on a break.... do they get wat the words mean???
4. aww ryan is so sweet as well sayin he'll be there to tlk and stuff (kinda 'minds me o summit else 2 !)
5. cookie dough... not chocolate!!! u promised chocolate jj! :( i was all ready with my SPECIAL review and it wasnt there :(((
6. the nightmare before christmas... i wonder y u used that movie... rotflmao!
7. they danced... dancetydancedancedance.. it was "time to dance" !?! get it!?! lol im soo gr8 at jokes!
8. i luvs randomipod songs they RULEZZZZZZZZZZ
9. YESS BRENDON AND MICHELLE BROKE UP WOOOOT MUHAHAHHAHAHA
10. take it ur likein infinity on high then huh? me meh nt so much random ans SO interesting fact there!
11./getting over people that didn't really mean much in the first place, but once they're gone, it hurts more than you think. I guess the saying's true: anything is better than to be alone."/nutha one 4 ya " id rather feel pain than nuthin' at all" pain- three days grace its off one x and its true.. both cuz its wen u realise ur alone that evrythin hits u in 1 and u dunno where to turn cuz theres no1 there...
12.(12 ppl!) i want ICECREAMMMMMMMMMMM... chocolate pref.:D?
i luv this chapp jj i really do. it really shows evry1 for themselves ya no? gr8 ritin seriously... no shit fuckin awesum! mores always a good thing though innocent smile hey wait...scratch the last.. im in no way iinnocent (insert images here!)
Author's responseomg, u managed 12 points! i am impressed! tis mike, and mike is BAD! she is... exactly what u said! lol. u think its sooo u? thats freaky, u gotta admit! SO FRIENDS!! but in his defence (dunno why im defending him) she didnt ACTUALLY say they were on a break. and guys are thick so u know. ryan is sweet, in real life he seems sweet. well, they all r actually! OMG - i cant believe i forgot about the chocolate!!! im changing it, maybe. o yeah, i had 2 put that film in. yes, they danced! random songs r great. YES - THEY BROKE UP. i said at the beginning that people will like it! o yeh, loving the album, lol!! always listening 2 it. that is true, very true. lol, i dont have any choc on me at the mo, sorry! i got vanilla? not the same... yay, thanku so much! i cant believe that u/people actually LIKE it!! yeh, scratch that last!!! lol :DDD u love me really
- ok try again damnnnn fuck it!!!:
13 pts (hehe reminds me of "points of authority" im just rndmly krazzi!)... enjoy:
1. dunno y but "ryro" just makes me gigle... tickles my funni bone... idk y though...
2. Ryan in his boxers.. ok dude wefyb.. ;)
3. "And plus, if I was to protest to gorgeous guys wondering around the house with no shirt on, I would be mental," true tru dude ...
4.dundundundun... SMOOTHIE MAN... tot he rescue lol!
5..../"the understatement of the century"/ omg freakkky... dude the IRONY IS ACK HIDDEESSS i was on the fone and i sed... th nd then 10 sec l8r... i red it on here.. freakky duudde im scared... (hehehe scared is a TDG song!:D"
6. u like brendon in a scarf doncya? i mean... we all do but u do def.. THE BRENDON SCARF.. lol
7. i wonder hu else has a pain in the ass brother... and hus family aint a trainwreck huh?
8. rly good ... all the stuff u sed bout brendon nd bout his bros nd stuff.. def. v. appropriate
9. mmmm pancakes... hahaha funni bone again cuz it minds me of "frat party at the pankake festival":D rndmnessness
10. this os pff. the food chappie... pancakes... smoothie it makes me hungry...
11. omg they made out... 2 getha sooo have bin waiting 4 that 4 like EVER... she did ... ROCK WITH URIE :D:D:D...no more michelle???!!! ahh idc wooo they made out... wait i sed tht already aww well.. happy dance!
12. rly cute ending all snuggly awwwwww...
13!. is mikey ever coming back??? hint hint im so nt obvious!
i rewrote that alll frm memory...well there my 13 pts (of authority ;D) lol really gr8 chappie... updates will not go a miss though :D and btw can i get in on sum of that chocolate/cake/icecream/cookie/factory stuff pleez??? im randomy random today nd veryyyy obsessive of stuff :D luved it SONGA!
Author's responseaww, u had 2 write it again?! lol. sorry, its funny! i cant believe u wrote 13 points! ryro, thats his nickname i think, lol. yh, it would be a hot sight. not as hot as brendon with no shirt on, which also happened :DDD i know its true! yup, 2 the rescue! lol... calm down! yup, hes hot!! probably many, but meh. lol, thanks. god, GET A GRIP!! lol, only kidding :D go eat something then, lol, sorry. YAY!!! THEY DID!! :DDDDDD it was cute, werent it?! did i write that bit ok? well... if i write a sequel, he may... yeh, cos iv been promoted 2 JEWELLERY!!! hehe. yes, i am songs, jj, geets, san, watever u wana cal me really. iv heard most before. lol
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