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Who's The Better Killer?
6 reviewsEver wonder what the quiet kid's thinking about when he gets picked on? (Not for the squeamish)
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Who's The Better Killer?
(#) IcedHope 2005-09-18
Well, I only have a couple of complaints. 1. I do not, brag about my killing ability. 2. Your dead on about the extra bullet. 3. It was a damn good story keep writing and one more thing. Great detail in the death scenes.Who's The Better Killer?
(#) Sage 2005-12-09
Two words...Fucking Brilliant
Author\'s Response: ...thank youWho's The Better Killer?
(#) Cobalt-Blue 2006-01-02
Not bad. There are a few typos that need to be addressed, and a couple of misspellings. Neat premis. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
Author\'s Response: No matter how many times I edit I suppose I am always going to miss a few mistakes but as long as you know what word I was trying to spell I see it as an issue but I’ll keep working on it, hope you enjoy the rest of my stories.Who's The Better Killer?
(#) dnalia 2006-11-26
Your spelling sucks, but the story was pretty good. Nice ending.Author's response
thaks for bringing that to my attention, i went back and fixed it up a bit, i doubt i got everything though but i triedWho's The Better Killer?
(#) GR21 2006-11-29
A little bloody with the cheerleaders but otherwise it's a dream come trueAuthor's response
isn't it though :)Who's The Better Killer?
(#) Kairu-kun 2008-08-05
Ahahahaha...I've had a dream alot like this before. Stupid cheerleaders...great job!
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