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• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) cjonbloodletter 2007-01-25

  Hey great fic so far. I love the details you've put in this and I would love to see this continue. As for pairings... You know, to tell you the truth, I've never really cared for either Hermione or Cho. Cho's way to self focussed(insecure and paranoid too, I think she's probably doing drugs to help with the pressure of being the all around perfect girl at school). Hermione is to focussed on everything but her self, alienating people with her self righteous bull$#%*(there are kids on this site). I don't believe Harry as a character has room to grow in either relationship, Cho would have him enslaved to her insecure ways and Hermione's domineering personality would errode Harry's.I'm gonna add this story to my favorites as I see great pottential in it.
  Keep it up,
  Cjon the Bloodletter
  Conqueror of the Dark Realms

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and revewing. I intend to develop both Hermione and Cho in my story, so we will have a chance to discuss what is better. Thanks for your opinions regarding the ship. The next chapter should be up in a few minutes.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) michelline 2007-01-25

  very insightful so far. I definitely like the humanization of the slytherins. And I vote for Harry/Hermione.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and your opinion regarding the Slytherins and the ship. The next chapter will be up in a few minutes.
  
  Regards,
  Maidros

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) DavidMPotter 2007-01-26

  Great start. I look forward to more soon...

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and commenting, and the encouragement.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) Dragen 2007-01-30

  First off, Possible ships - Harry/Hermione, or Harry/Cho, why not have Harry/Hermione/Cho. As I do like a good threesomes.
  
  Other then that what a great start to the story, I like that two Slytherins has joined the DA, it shows that not all them are evil.

  Author's response

  Well, the only problem is I am not sure I can pull off a threesome convincingly. My romance writing skills are rather sub-par, so I would rather not experiment with a threesome at the juncture.
  
  Yes, I agree that not all Slytherins are evil, and I intend to work on that part of the story.
  
  Thanks for your opinions, and encouragement, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

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