- A very very good story... A very different start to a time travel one... I am not that convinced about the Hermione thing but hey... your story... please update soon... I like to see how you will involve FLeur with them and to what year he goes back... either its fourth year or end of fifth if Fleur is to be included... But still, there is Bill to consoder... I cant wait... please update soon...
Author's responseYou will probably know when Harry will arrive at the second chapter.
The Fleur thing... It's going to take a while for her to even get mentioned in the story... I only put her in there because she will be an important character later in the story.
I'm going to change the story so that Bill won't even come up in it, probably...
Thanks for the review.
- just read the first 3 chapters - impressive start: impressive power Harry gained through his travels, the council - we have to see how this is evolving and I really like the twist you put in the change of the timeline: as the world as we know it will be extinct a change to the timeline could only change it to the better...
How will you manage the transition of the 'belongings' of Michael Moon to Harry - you better prepare a will!
Looking forward to your updates!
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