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Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
18 reviewsAU. Harry Potter won the war. But the price was the world itself. Alone, nothing stops him from attempting to correct the mistakes of the past. Time Travel. SuperHarry. HHrFD.
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Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) MasterBralia 2007-01-26
Interesting start so far. Will be waiting for updates!Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-01-26
It's rough around the edges, there's no denying that, but this story has promise. I hope to see more soon.
In terms of corrections, the only GLARING one was you calling Remus "Sirius" when saying he was fighting Wormtail.Author's response
No. You read it wrong. It says:
"There, on his left side, he saw his last link to his parents and Sirius dueling Peter Pettigrew."
So, as you see, it's 'the last link to his parents and Sirius', and not Sirius dueling.
Thanks for the review. By the way, when are you going to update your stories?Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Gibby 2007-01-26
Sounds to be a good over all start. Can't wait for the next update.
-GibbyHarry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) ficfiend 2007-01-26
Wow that has to be the best start to a time travel fic that i have ever read(albeit i've only been reading fics for a couple of years).Anyway keep up the good work and i cant wait to read more
-ficfiend-Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Nautilus 2007-01-26
hey, so far soo good. i are you plannin on having another Harry in this AU world, a harry who will live with his parents. with the OLD Harry, living somewhere else. or are you goin got merge the two harrys together. i personally would love to see two of them...
what aboout FD, Fleur, i am guessing, what the story behind that. a new love possibly. anyway, i look forward to what you come up with...
congrats and update soon.Author's response
Yep, it's Fleur. I have a particukar scene that i will use to explain her being involved in all this, but that will take a long time to come up.
About the two Harrys thing... you will have to wait and see!Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Nautilus 2007-01-26
hey, so far soo good. i are you plannin on having another Harry in this AU world, a harry who will live with his parents. with the OLD Harry, living somewhere else. or are you goin got merge the two harrys together. i personally would love to see two of them...
what aboout FD, Fleur, i am guessing, what the story behind that. a new love possibly. anyway, i look forward to what you come up with...
congrats and update soon.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Silvanis 2007-01-27
Pretty damn good. I liked the way you had Harry lose control and just walk around knocking off Death Eaters like they where nothing. Can't wait for the next chapter.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) koppe 2007-01-27
Great start. I wonder where this will go, so please update soon.
I wonder if Harry retain all his (and Voldemort's) knowledge, if he retain all his magic (as it were before he returned) and if he retained his hidden skill -- the ability to absorm magic (though I guess he did that with the first Killing Curse).
I very much wonder how far back you'll take him -- and what changes he'll make in regards to his friends, others, Dumbledore and the Dursleys... will he get Sirius free? Will he manage to take out Voldemort before?
I'm also wondering how soon he'll make a move on Hermione -- maybe as early as 1st, 2nd or 3rd year (long before Ron notices her, or think of her as anything but anoying)... and I really hope there will be babies (preferbly early).
How about the books, heirlooms and money -- will he be able to take those back with him? Will he be able to hide all of it? What about the rings -- after all this should result in duplicates (one set from each timeline)? Will he be able to use his status as heir to various families, now that he knows about them (and have the ring), to get to his vault and such?
Very interesting, keep up the great work and update soon,
-KoppeAuthor's response
You will have to wait for most of your answers, as i don't really know it myself. One thing I can tell you: NO BABIES!!! For christ sakes, I don't believe when people say that they are eleven so they will have no relationship, as I had my first girlfriend with 11 and had sex with 13, but babies? C'mon... I'm not saying it doesn't happens, because I know a woman that had a child when she was 13, but that won't happen in my story.
Thanks for the review.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) jabarber69 2007-01-27
Hey cool story, hope to see more of it. but you wouldnt happen to be thejadedfalcon at ffnet would ya?Author's response
Nope. My pen name there is torres_arkel too.
Thanks for the review.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) NacNud 2007-01-27
Like what you have so far. It has a large amount of potential. Keep up the good work and can't wait to read more. :)
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