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• Family Issue

  (#) koppe 2007-01-29

  So far so good.
  I'm guessing that a)Harry must soon admit to someone that he's been sleeping with a Death Eater and that b)Bellatrix must make choice regarding the child she's carrying.
  Keep up the good work,
  -Koppe

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and reviewing, it's very helpful. I'd say your predictions are mostly spot-on, I have the story outlined to the birth of the child after that the muse will have to tell me what happens

• Family Issue

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-17

  OK that was different and brought back horrid flashbacks of Sand Hill at Fort Benning, Georgia. ACK! Much better with both length and content.

• Family Issue

  (#) bgoldnyxnet 2009-06-04

  I liked where this story was going, until I got to this segment and Mad-eye Moody. He was never shown talking with an accent like that in canon, nor referring to Voldemort as the "Dark Tosser".
  
  Too far OOC for me. Sorry.

  Author's response

  I appreciate your comments, Moody should have a Scottish accent, I guess I missed that part, but I think Dark Tosser would be a Moody-ism.
  N!

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