Categories > Books > Harry Potter > The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
Reviews
The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Shaggy37 2007-01-29
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! Dumbledork is a manipulative old coot who is outta touch with reality. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. So anything Dumbledore does to Tonks isn't really worth worrying about is it? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-01-29
Excellent chapter, really reminiscent of a trial I remember from Family Matters. That being said, you did it justice in this story as well. One thing that I might have done different is to have Dumbledore added to a wizard's trial for willfully and knowingly placing Harry Potter in harms way by placing him with them. For neglect, for not checking on Harry, and if that wasn't the case and it was to ensure this mistreatment, then to prosecute him as an accessory before and after the fact. You're allowing him to get off too easy, and while Dumbledore very well may be looked at as leader of the light your story clearly shows that he will do whatever he deems needs to be done for his own greater good, and is not LIGHT, nor a LEADER. Food for thought, and that was what I was hinting at during one of my last reviews. Excellent work.
Geovanni LucianoThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-03-16
Outstanding. I really like Tonks.
gunny
Sign up to review this story.