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• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) Tonis 2007-03-13

  I'm not near smart enough to give some big constructive review. But i AM smart enough to know i love your amazing story, :D please update soon!

• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) wesley 2007-04-23

  The story idea is okay, but it needs to be cleaned up, there are many things that are explained in a way that make it obvious that you knew you were making Harry and some of your other creations to powerful for the setting you had.
  
  Several of the explanations were very forced. Also, several of your sentences are very wordy. You use names too much, or repeat what has already been said.

• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-05-01

  Outstanding, I think this will be a fun read.
  
  gunny

• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-05-01

  Outstanding, I think this will be a fun read.
  
  gunny

• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-05-01

  Outstanding, I think this will be a fun read.
  
  gunny

• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) Joyfullscroll 2007-06-09

  I finally found this story once more! I don't remember if this story was posted also on PK or FFN? I'm always a fan of 'Time Traveler Harry/Hermione' and one that ships Harmone. Please update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to this one being updated.

• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) Maxtaf 2007-09-09

  Great story! I really like the way you chose to have Harry travel back in time, as opposed to the normal "Old Harry's mind in Young Harry's body" thing. That may happen with the soul merger, but he can set stuff up beforehand. It seems your Harry learned something from all those chess games with Ron.
  
  I agree with twilliams1797. Harry's saving everyone this time around, he needs to help Luna's mom. He knows what it's like to grow up without a parent and is already working on making sure he and Neville don't have to go through that. He'd do whatever it took for Luna, as well. As for how Luna would act, probably almost as spacey (she is a Seer), but without the weirdness (Nargles, butterbeer cap necklaces, etc.) induced by too much exposure to the Quibbler without a mother's moderating influence.
  
  Please continue this story. It is one of the best of it's type.

• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) Xadro 2007-12-22

  Absolutely Brilliant i really loved reading your story, to bad you stopped writing this could really be the best fic i have ever read if you ever finish it!
  
  
  - Xadro

• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) DragonMage101 2008-04-15

  Nice story.
  Are you still writing the next chapter or have you put it in hiatus?
  
  I hope you are going to continue it.

• Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

  (#) juanjoseso 2008-10-01

  I hope you update this story it's getting good

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