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AU. Harry Potter won the war. But the price was the world itself. Alone, nothing stops him from attempting to correct the mistakes of the past. Time Travel. SuperHarry. HHrFD.
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Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Black_s_Phoenix 2007-01-29
Way off on the whole Galleon idea. Lower the amount... drastically. No offense but at the most it should be a 10 billion galleons. Remember that a galleon is worth like $5.00 in 1991 so that 346 billion galleons would be rediculous.Author's response
Imagine 1000 years of profit going to a single place, that has to be a really impressive amount of money, don't you think?
Now imagine what Harry would have by merging the Potter, Black, Gryffindor, Slytherin and a part of the Dumbledore accounts all into one.
I don't think it would be all that farfetched.
Thanks for the review.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Nautilus 2007-01-30
loved it... i look forward to see where thge problems start arise for harry. cheers.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Nautilus 2007-01-30
i reckon jus have it at 34.6bn. instead of 346bn.. or whatever it was. cheersAuthor's response
Imagine 1000 years of profit going to a single place, that has to be a really impressive amount of money, don't you think?
Now imagine what Harry would have by merging the Potter, Black, Gryffindor, Slytherin and a part of the Dumbledore accounts all into one.
I don't think it would be all that farfetched.
Thanks for the review.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Dragen 2007-01-30
What another great chapter, I do love the Ancients; Artemis, a Phoenix that had an appearance that seemed to scream royalty, Gadius, the King Basilisk of the group, Marsil, an offspring of a Royal Griffin and a Shadow Lion, Elara, the female Nundu... I like what they do for the Council of Ancients.
'No one noticed the briefly glowing eyes of both baby Harry and the Harry that had come back in time.' I don't like the sounds of that, Harry's plan's aren't going will for him.
So Michael Moon got the rings belonging to the Gryffindor and Slytherin Hairs and there vaults. I wonder why they had change though??
I have a bad feeling that something is going to happen, that will put Harry's in danger.
So please hurry and update soon. On last thing, how is Fleur going to be added in the story, if Harry is in love with Hermione??Author's response
The eyes glowing thing... that will cause an unexpected reaction.
I didn't feel confortable letting the rings being the same after merging them. They are magical rings, so if a fusion ocurred don't you think the power would be combined also?
Fleur... don't worry, I got that covered, although you probably won't know for a while.
Thanks for the review.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) banner 2007-01-30
I like the way this Harry has put a great deal of thought into what he intends to change. Most time traveling Harry stories have him just leaping in, making huge changes without considering any repercussions.
Where is Snape? Maybe Harry can influence some of the DE children to actually fight for the Light.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) devo193 2007-01-30
A very good story so far, even though the time travel thing has been used to death and then redeath.
Keep updating and work on the spelling a tiny bit.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Anaknisatanas 2007-01-30
For a moment I thought that Harry would wind up being way older than Hermione. Then I finished the chapter and realized that in a year he would be merging his soul with that of his younger self. I can't wait to see the changes you will make and how they will change the timeline. I hope you update again soon.Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) Alorkin 2007-01-31
This beginnig is INTENSE! This review will cover the first three chapters, so please forgive it's length.
Ch1: The battle scene was terrifyingly accurate. I have been in combat and have known the fear you find there. I can easily relate to Harry's feelings. I like his introspection. It made for a believable character.
It appears his destruction of Voldy was instinctive, rather than ingrained.
His decision to return to correct the past is likely the best, as the rest of the worrld had been devestated anyway.
Ch2; OK, So the Black Emperor is one big honkin' dragon. Nice touch. Voldy's afraid of them. Smart man!
Isn't it interesting that Harry manages to find allies in the most unusual places?
Ch3: well, Harry has once again found allies, this time in the form of the goblins at Gringotts. His invstment in the bank will almost guarantee the goblins will stand beside him.
The connction with baby Harry is an unusual oone. Sinc he's comeback physically, he can be in two placesw att once.
His preperations for the Grrqangerrs is, while ultimately selfish in nature, benificial to all.
Harry seems to have planned for eeverything, except how to protect the Longbottooms. Since he has to be there in order to fight Voldemort, and the fight will likly exhaust him if not kill him outright, perhaps he can station Mad-Eye at the Longbottom place. Of all the Aurors, he would be the one best suited to successfully handle Bella and the brothers Lestrange. Of course, if Harry survives the meeting with Voldemort, he can go to the Longbottom's home himself. It wasn't until after Voldy vanished that the psychobitch and her bookends attacked.
I have placed this on my 'alerts' list and hope to read more soon. AlorkinHarry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes
(#) twilliams1797 2007-02-02
I will try to be constructive.. evrything in the story seems to be so grand, almost beyond belief, this is not a problem really, because suspension of disbelief is part and parcel of writing and reading fiction. (my opinion) is that it could be easy to fall over into cliche', Harry is a dragon animagus, Harry is a phoenix animagus, why not just Harry is a sparrow animagus.. no mattter, this is a grand, no epic story in the works, so lets go with it.. it appears that in your story Harry represents the office of human representative to the universe of magic, thereby bringing the world into balance.
now it seems the trick is bringing that world into balance and manipulating things without being seen. now to take away the influence of DD , or at least keep him from gaining too much, and ridding the world of Fudge and his cronies.. here's to looking forward to where you go with this.
ps don't forget Luna's mother when she is nine..Author's response
If I give Harry another Animagus form, it won't be something so grand. Accepting ideas, since I don't want to reveal to his parents his true form and I haven't thought about one for now.
Luna's mother... Now you caught me. I hadn't even remembered her. I already know what to do about Neville's parents but I absolutely have no idea how to write something about Luna's mother. She died in an accident, nothing to do with Death Eaters... I also have no idea how Luna would act in a world that she didn't lose her mother...
Thanks for the review, you gave me some interesting fact that I think will stay on my head for a while.
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