(#) Particle_Accelerator 2007-02-01Uh-oh.
Nice twist with Voldie using polyjuice or his illusion spells, whatever he did. I've never seen that one before. When are we going to see Harry again, and why isn't Hermione freaking out - her friend has been kidnapped?!!
Author's responseIt was Polyjuice. Harry will be awake on the next chapter. It'll also explain Hermione's reaction.
- good chapter!
nice trick at the exchange...dumbledore is in your story as gullible as in canon...
...lily's interrogation of snape was a bit lacking for a woman who is good with charms...surely she can be creative...
poor tonks, i hope when harry can escape, he can take her with him alive...
hope for a h/hr-pairing!! =P
Author's responseThanks. Hopefully, the next chapters will explain your observations. H/Hr pairing is still under consideration.
(#) Anaknisatanas 2007-02-01Great update. You've kept up the suspense by not letting us know what happened to Harry and also not telling us what Snape knows! I really want to know waht happened to Harry. He can't be asleep or in his coma for too long.
Author's responseThanks. Harry will be awake at the next chapter. Snape will be interrogated properly.
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-02-01Too bad the chapter was so short. I enjoyed it, though. I always like to see the dark side winning small battles, it adds an element of realism to the story that many lack.
Author's responseHopefully, the next chapters will satisfy more of your expectations.
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