Fifteen years on, and things have changed for the former Xiaolin apprentices.
Noticed a few typos, but I can sucessfully say this is the first piece of XS fic that I have read -been able to read- and enjoyed. I might recomend more dialogue tags to make it flow more easily, but besides that, it was very nicely done.
(#) avi17 2006-06-25
Although I can't stand the RaimundoxKimiko pairing, I still have to admit that this is cute. And if you can make me say that a RaixKim story is cute, then you're a pretty darn good writer.
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