'there's a fine line between love and hate' they've hated each other for so long so what happens when there both home for christmas at the same time. SORRY IT'S BEEN A LONG TIME BUT I HAVE BEEN WO...
(#) pinkmonkey 2007-03-04I like this story. I like that she is pretty tough to get :)) Hopefully you can post more soon.
Author's responsethanks i have wrote loads more i've almostr finished it but i didn't think peole where that interested in it becuase i haven't got many reviews but i will post some more soon
(#) myusedromance 2007-03-09love it and can't wait for more!!
(#) myusedromance 2007-03-16YEAH! as much as i didn't really liek liam in the beginning, i like him now. but i'm still rooting for Benji. Update soon and keep upt he great work
(#) pinkmonkey 2007-03-26It all sounds like a soap opera...First she rejects him, then he rejects her, then she does it again...There's no flow. Besides, i think you should do a little research before you write, cause if your ribs are really broken, there is no time to argue and make out in the bathroom. You need to hurry to the hospital. And...you should re-read the chapter before submitting to check all the spelling and gramma mistakes.
I'm sorry if i offended you in any way. Your story is not bad, you just need to put some more thoughts and work in it. Im sure if you really try, you can write a masterpiece:)
Author's responsethank you for your opinion and no you've not offened me. i wouldn't ask what you think if i didn't really want to know. you make good points and thank you for that but on the other hand it's just a fiction and it's just for fun. yes i know it's not going to be exactly perfect and it nost defiantly isn't going to be a best selling novel but thats why it's on a fanfiction site not in a book store.
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