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Changes
(#) ficwad_girl 2007-01-26
I like it ! Keep going because i'm sure that everyone wants to know what happens next . I love the whole " what's in her eyes " thing ! Continue PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!Changes
(#) gucci84 2007-01-27
What's Wrong With Her Eyes??????????????
This is driving me insane. I can't figure it out. YOU MUST update!
Every time you finish a sentence with either a period or a question mark or exclamation mark, you should put a space before you start typing again. It's an eye rule things. Makes it easier to read.
Other than that. Keep up the good work.Changes
(#) panda_1418 2007-01-28
You should MOST DEFINATELY CONTINUE!! Way to leave us hanging!! Very exciting, can't wait for the update! Oh, and welcome to the board.
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