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• Not Looking

  (#) ZippersOverYou 2007-02-04

  Wow. Just...wow. Beautifully unpredictable ending with a great sorta twist...amazing. Great job. I loved this story.

• Not Looking

  (#) MMMramen 2007-02-04

  Oh Katy Bear, I really thought she was going to end up with Patrick. Though, I was a little confused. Even though Pete changed what happened, Patrick still managed to cheat on Olivia? I feel like I missed something. Who did the red bra belong to? The same woman from before? Did "they" put it there? So many questions. But I still gave you pointage. A "moving" for old time's sake.

• Not Looking

  (#) LOVELA 2007-02-04

  OH Katy! Not only did you take Pete's breath away, you took mine as well.
  
  I'm sick...again and doped up on Nyquil, so I have to sleep, but I just want you to know that this rocks hard and you do too!!

• Not Looking

  (#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-05

  Images are the worst kind of memories, because they are so vivid, they stay within the confines of your head for the longest time. The image of his infidelity was like stamp, sealing the envelope addressed to her, telling her he was no longer in love with her. -> My shallow words of praise would just ruin this. But it gripped me, Katy. Know that.
  
  I love it how you let the story unfold slowly in front of our eyes. How you lead me up the garden path and then slam the gate shut... ? ;)
  
  This was an amazing story. I still can't make sense of all of it, but that doesn't matter. If some questions are unanswered, that makes for a more life-like story. Because we never know everything.
  
  So you've had a quite productive weekend, eh? You rock the Biscuit rock, dear! huggage

• Not Looking

  (#) riaryder 2007-02-05

  I don't really know how that made me feel. For some reason, even when it looked like Patrick and Olivia were going to end up together, I was rooting for Pete.
  You actaully made him likeable despite his behaviour at some points.
  And your last line. Wow. Just wow.
  And once again, I go into your last chapter armed with tissues. Because I'm sure I'll need them.
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