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• To Rewrite History

  (#) carvell 2007-02-06

  intresting, although i must admit the durslys changeing there attitude within 5min's is unrealistic i keep reading but harry makeing peace with his family was to fast, over a few chapter's yes but in 5mins.............

• To Rewrite History

  (#) koppe 2007-02-06

  Good start. Though I hope for a bit more of an explaination -- especially the reasons by Harry forgiving his guardians.
  Would love for the Dursleys (due to Vernon's "lack of exposure") to exposed to a bit of Wizarding-culture -- maybe seeing Diagon-alley or Hogwarts... perhaps even meeting someone as bigoted as Vernon, but the other way around -- like the Malfoys.
  Keep up the good work,
  -Koppe

• To Rewrite History

  (#) Dragen 2007-02-10

  What a great start to the story;
  
  It looks like that Harry and his family are finally going to get along with each other.

• To Rewrite History

  (#) brazilianpimp 2007-02-17

  The story is alright I suppose. I'm really not one for this type of story but i can handle it. one thing really confused me... you put the X rating in a G rated story...those two dont go well...

  Author's response

  I know, I've a bit of editing to do on the parameters of the story. Glad you can 'handle' it, even if it's not your type of fic.

• To Rewrite History

  (#) janeaverage 2007-04-06

  This is really interesting, but the whole thing seems rather sudden. It would greatly improve the story if you had some buildup to the family's change of heart. However I always like to see Harry and Dudley developing a relationship so I'll take what I can get ;)

  Author's response

  Thanks! It's cough actually my first fanfic, so I did the typical novice thing and pushed it to get it to where I want. Now I'm slowing things down...

• To Rewrite History

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-04-27

  Interesting start.
  
  gunny

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