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Lunchtime at school provides the set for a little experimentation to prove a bet. [One shot, M/F kissage, M/M pairing, Rating is loose]
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Kiss and Tell
(#) Ithilwen 2007-02-10
Vivid, but a bit off-kilter. I accidentally read the explanation before the story, so I'm not sure if it would make sense without it.Kiss and Tell
(#) Terrenea 2007-10-06
I think it was a quite funny story. ^^
I've been reading several of your stories and a couple of them, this included, should get a "real" story to them. They're more like side-stories, really.. at least in my opinion.Author's response
First I gotta say that I was really glad to see your review because no one's been reading my fics lately, so I guess I feel a little .... neglected xD I guess it just means I need to put out more fics.
But you're totally right! I intentionally write my short fics/one-shots with the idea that they ar pre established characters, so I dont accidentially go into long conveluted explinations about who they are etc and forget the story. Howver, I have wanted to do a deeper story on some of my one-shot characters, and I deffinately think that Luca and Kevin would be two that I wouldn't mind writing a longer story on at all. If enough people want me to do it, I might just, well... do that ^__^
Again, thanks for the review! And I'm sorry for the extra long response!
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