(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-09I appreciate this chapter so you should, too. :)
The interaction between the kids (or "kids") is still brilliant. I especially enjoyed Molly and Patrick's fight.
Author's responsehehe. I enjoyed Molly and Patrick's fight as well. I read somewhere that he said he used to have a short fuse, and I had to put something in there. They were too much the "perfect couple" all the time.
Thanks Miss Alex!
- Whoa, whoa, whoa! Whoa! What is this? Two chapters and I didn't know? Gah. I am shamefaced.
Author's responsefor shame for shame!
but not really 'cause they went up last night at like midnight. lol.
now here's my question based on this review...did you actually read them ;) lol jk. loves you!
- One chapter down, another to go. I like that Patrick and Molly aren't the cute, happy couple. And Pete...what was up with him. Was the van really that hot? He needs to man up. Seriously. Anyway, nice job. Pointage for you.
Author's responselmao. Patrick and Pete both claimed that crap really happened, but they never went into detail. apparently one day Pete just snapped and tried to strangle Patrick. Plus I felt the need to go along with the crowd and have the boys fight. lol
yea, Molly and Patrick will NEVER be the "cute, happy couple" but its esspecially difficult to pull that off when your stuffed in a van with someone you aren't used to spending days at a time with--add in 3 other BOYS. you get the picture.
(#) Frenchie189 2007-02-09"Uhh...why did Patrick just walk past me humming "Let's Get It On"?"
That made me giggle.
I love it.
Onward to the next chapter. -->
Author's response"Let's Get It On"=one of the best songs ever (so despite the obvious) and that's why he was humming it Peterpan! duh.
I love that you loved it.
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