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Summer of Fourth Year Part III: Shopping and Scheming
8 reviewsHarry talks to his aunt about the necessity of his family wanting him, and he and his friends plot at Florean Fortescue's Ice Cream Parlour.
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(#) Alorkin 2007-02-09
This is without doubt, one of the strangest fics I have read. Harry is so far out of character, I cannot wait to see what he does next.
being civil to MALFOY? Befriending Millicent Bulstrode and Thedore Nott? Wierd!
I have placed this on my 'alerts' list, and hope to read more soon. AlorkinTo Rewrite History
(#) 31415 2007-02-09
This is still one of the least "in character" stories I've read lately, but it is also one of the most interesting. Did you set about writing a Harry who acted rather cleverly as a contrast to JKR's "lets do the stupidest thing we can think of", or has it just happened?To Rewrite History
(#) Dragen 2007-02-10
What another great chapter,
Whay did the Harry exchanged pound notes for galleons, when he got a lot in his valtes??
Snape being 'nice' to Harry, who would have thought about that?
Hermione seems to be ok with the snake house, but mind you she never did have pobliams with them.
So Harry is make some unorthodox allies with the Malfoys, not a bad idea.
So Harry now can do some household Charms now, great, I can't wait to see what happens next.To Rewrite History
(#) MiFo71 2007-02-10
Realy great take on Political!Harry. A little confusing in the first chapter, but that cleared up in the third. Good style and grammar, makes it easy on the eyes to read. Thanks so far.
Questions for the next chapters: Will Harry meet the real Moody before school?
Would Harry be able to convince Dumbledore to install Anti-Animagnus-Wards (forced reverse) as 'additional' security, esp. with the Tournament in view ??
HANC - Happily awaiting next chapterTo Rewrite History
(#) twilliams1797 2007-02-10
ok it will be interesting to see where this goes, establish the suspension of disbelief and work with the idea that the malfoys can be reasonable people. lets enjoy this trip!!To Rewrite History
(#) hpssslashfan 2007-02-15
Madam Hopkirk is a little OOC but this chapter is still fun.To Rewrite History
(#) Chibeh 2007-05-22
Interesting story so far.
I normally like stories later in the series, but this one is good for being so early on!
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