"The ball swirled and whirled around us, some traumatic melody played, and couples danced furiously between us."
Ok this is just something I came up with. Just a 1 chapter, short story. Reveiw i...
That was cool.....! :)
AMAZING description! :)
That was amazing. Just ine thing. You wrot ethat she nodded then said no. Was it meant to be shook her head?
Apart from that, like I said, it was amazing.
lol yes that's what I meant. I wrote this at like 3am last night, so forgive the misspellings and little errors like that.
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