Part 3. in which Molly settles into life at NYU and meets some fairly interesting people.
(#) danceislife 2007-02-12Hope we love her enought? How can we NOT!?! I love how you flashed back to the fight inbetween real time happenings. I wanna know about this first roommate though...
Author's responselol. Molly's great. a little cracked but great. I doubt we're gonna find out about the icky first roomate...that was an homage to my first college roomate who lasted 2 months (instead of 2 days) but it was pretty much the same idea.
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-13Kyle to the rescue. Or ice cream. Both works for me. Nice room mate interaction. :)
I am in love with the flashbacks. That was super!
Also, I hope the professor makes a move on her. I lust for drama and breaking the law.
Take a point and produce more. Jetzt.
Author's responseyes Kyle to the rescue! with ice cream. I had to stick her in there as I appear to be making a much larger then cameo role in "Addicts..."
the professor...hmm...curiouser and curiouser...who says he's the one that makes the move? who says a move on anyone's part will be made at all? just gonna have to keep reading.
I'm off at 12 today...so after a really long doctors appt where he resembles a vampire I will sit down and write until my perfectly manicured fingers bleed...or the carpal tunnel kicks in.
(#) xXPrincessLissaXx 2007-02-13Hey
Still love the story.
Its soooo good.
Update soon & make me happy. :)
your a talented writer.
Author's responsethanks so much.
I've got some stuff to take care of this afternoon but I'm gonna try and get at least 2 chapters out by tonight.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-13I wanted to rate it as hot because Angry Patrick does stuff for me....but seen as you did such a fine job of writing beautifully and structuring the flashbacks perfectly, I'll go with a more relevant rating....
Author's responseAngry Patrick does things for me too. Its slightly disturbing...I think its the need to see the normally composed controlled hatrack a little wild.
Thanks for the compliments it took me a really long time to write the chapter (well long for me anyway) but I was determined to get it out instead of doing another 2 weeks without updates. Thanks for the point! loves it!
- Ya know something? I don't like his attitude. Nor do I care for Molly's. They're so retarded for each other. My obsession for these characters is so not healthy. Expect the bill from my therapy sessions. Anyway, moving on...
"Well...the conspicuous absence of any and all mention of a boyfriend...and yet tons of pictures of someone who obvious is or once was a boyfriend. I put two and two together. I told you we were soulmates. You've managed to do the impossible. My dialogue is so...dare I say...intelligent? That calls for points. If bonus points were an option...well, you get the idea.
Author's responseyeaaaaa little obsessive there huh love? lol at least you're not the one writing them. I sit here going "noooo! don't break them up bitch!!! AHHH!!!"
hehe, you mean you aren't intelligent. crap. uhh...creative license. I know you aren't a merch girl but it was the best I could come up with ;)
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