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Cobwebs On My Zipper
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-12
Where have you been all my life?
This story is so beautiful. I can really see the conections between the characters; the dependency Pete has on Jess, the romantic relationships between Rebekah/Joe and Jess/Patrick. Melissa's betrayal was heartbreaking, and I really felt Pete's pain. It makes me wonder how this will effect the relationship Pete has with Andy and the rest of the band since they are all so in love and Pete just lost his.
Anyway, I really love this story and I hope more is on the way soon!!!Cobwebs On My Zipper
(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-13
Amazing chapter title, I adored how you tied it in, that was thoughtful and original.
I love your writing style and i@ll just keep telling you in the hope you'll keep satisfying me with more chapters.
:)
Thank you!Cobwebs On My Zipper
(#) riaryder 2007-02-14
For the love of God!
There were so many beautiful lines in this chapter. The stand-out being the title itself, and it's meaning. Wow.
I adore your writing. I'm starting to sound like a broken record, but I truly do.
Amazing. Beautiful. Please please update soon. The point is definitely a bribe xx
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