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We'll Make Them So Jealous - Patrick Stump
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-02-13
awww, i love it! i enjoyed the spanish arguements and translations, can't wait to see the progression.We'll Make Them So Jealous - Patrick Stump
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-13
Ah! I love how you put that together! The banter was just perfect within the family. And the translations by the cousin, repeatin what the argument was about/ the little brother just making everything worse- all made it that much more believable.
I really get so excited every time I see this story has been updated. I can't wait for more!Author's response
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(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-02-14
OMG! I absolutely loved this chapter. I love how you incorporated the spanglish (my fav. language btw. Haha.) The mention of Pete's cohones was too funny. And the x infinty "awww" factor of Patrick saying "I love you" was so adorable.Author's response
thank you - your reviews always make me happy :)
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(#) riaryder 2007-02-14
Great chapter. Her family are too funny.
The cahones on the internet! haha
And, aw sweetness at the end. Love it!We'll Make Them So Jealous - Patrick Stump
(#) fob4ever 2007-02-17
haha. i love her aunt!! Patricks totally sweet. thumbs up.
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