Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > When Your Heart Stops Beating
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When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) cutandbleed 2007-02-14
i really like this story
mysterious
lol
update soon?When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) ThePatient 2007-02-15
I've got to say i prefered the other two chapters although the ending was really good but i dont think the beginning was particularly as good as you others! It was still a excellant chapter though and please carry on!Author's response
Yeah, I'd have to say I agree with you! This was a tough one. I'm going to start working on the next chapter very soon =)When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) haleyxhomicide 2007-02-15
Poor Derrick!! What happend to hiM!
and why the fuck dosn't she have a bed?Author's response
You make me giggle :P
She has a bed, she just fell asleep on the futon. I guess I should have thrown that in there. Heheh.When Your Heart Stops Beating
(#) AlexSanDee 2007-02-16
Short chapter but that's OK. You are building your story.
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