(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-16Um, I LOVED it! Do you really have to ask? Actually, I loved jealous Oliver... for some reason, I love jealousy in stories. Maybe there is something wrong with me, who knows. And Patrick is adorable as usual. Anyway, Peyton needs to break up with Oliver because Patrick is... well, he's Patrick. Need I say more? Didn't think so. Have a rating point, my dear girl...
Author's responseLOL can I just say that you are like my favorite person ever! haha I love jealous Oliver, if only you could see what this kid looks like, sigh..he gives Patrick a run for his money. But Patrick is Patrick..and I just want him. I was at work today and all I kept thinking about are my characters..I think I'm going to act on those too by bringing them into the story. So thank you Gwen!
- Ooh, things are getting very interesting. And I think Joe's right, I see a love triangle developing too!
Peyton is very ballsy. I love that.
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. I'll bribe you with a point to update. Pretty please? :-)
Author's responseLOL! Have we stooped to bribery now? haha I might just have to take you up on that offer, and thank you again!
(#) x-xJafax-x 2007-02-17XD This could get pretty interesting! I really hope she catches Oliver or summink, then she needs to be "consoled" by Patrick! they would make such a good couple!! XD
Author's responseThey would, they complete each other on so many differents levels. If you could only see them in my head. LOL They are meant for one another, but I don't think Oliver will see it that way. Hmm...
- "I'm sensing a love triangle brewing. Can you feel it Peter?" Joe said as he turned in his seat and gave Patrick a look.
Typical Joe. Always stating the obvious.
Author's responselol Yes I had to capture Joe has being captain obvious, and he will be doing that alot through out the story.
- *Seeing nothing of interest Oliver slammed the door to the fridge shut. "Pssh! Whatever Peyton, I'm done fighting with you. Ugh, you know sometimes I wonder..."
"Wonder what Oliver?" Peyton yelled back, matching his tone.*
Yes, hips-n-hearts, what does he wonder?
Author's responselol I think you will find out soon, just not right now
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