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Swear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) rgiddles 2007-02-19
ok 14 points.. im gunna do this ppl... hopefully ? lol itll be np since as this fics friggin FAB! in no particular order.. (wateva springs 2 mind 1st actually :D)
1. GUITAR HERO OMG every celebrity plays that... well all the band ppl do and its friggin awesum!
2. pete wentz??? meh hes k i spose but... nd u see.. im happy... cuz i nu he signed em etc... i was VERY proud of myself 4 membaing... y i cnt i member REALLY important stuff though ie breathing? meh my minds crazzi nd i luvs it!
3. ""This is Vicky Alben, my girlfriend," Brendon stepped in. His girlfriend. Wow. MELTS Squeeeee.. he called...her his... GIRLFRIEND :D
4. i luv the way u put like age duznt matter rather thn havin a big fuss... CUZ IT DONT nd i rllly believe tht!
5. im sure ALL band appreciate non krazzi fans.. but come on... ill be the first to admit.. all good fans have their slightly crazy moments rite? ino... an u no... i DEF. do! and my really obsessive modes 2 :D
6. DRUMZZZZZZZZZZZZZ... sorry ickle hyperised there :D
7. brendon pouted ALOT in this chap i noticed... hey its nt a bad thing.. just an observation :D
8. wow kwel lurnn guitar.. i luv the fact that in my head... i get an image of u having ickle tantrums like u no while playin. ps. the introlike riff for 'Nails for Breakfast, Tacks for Snacks' is really good i likes it... dunno y but w/e :D
9. pay him back for teaching huh... 2 ways... COFF CHOCOLATE COFF ;)
10. twas v cute the first bit with the kissing nd cuddles awwwwwww luved it
11. lol brendon and towel... i will say NO MORE
12. like DUH... evry1 was hopin theyed get it on... like the guys sed... twas obvious tht they liked 1 anutha... twas onli a matter of time but im VERY happy now that the time has come :D
13. border line goofy idiot ROTFLMFAO this got mr giggling 4 EVER seriously i was cryin by the end... it tickled my funni bone
14. frosties... minds me of ritz nd the SONG... THERE GUNNA TASTE GREAT.. nah ill spare u the torture but hey id rather hav sams town than frosties from her
wow 14 pts (OF AUTHORITY)..sorry GR8 CHAPPIE and i really cnt wait 4 more so i luvs it.. ohh i sed that ahh well hu cres twas great :D
rob.Author's response
hehe, thanks, glad u liked it. yes, 14 points, lol! btw, he likes frosties, hence why i included that, not cause of the song. thanku! :DSwear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) meeniemoe 2007-02-19
I'm so sorry I haven't been leaving reviews (again). Internet failure = annoying-ness. But i'll leave a short review: so far, this is SO good. KEEP WRITING...or something worse will happen to me other than pulling my hair out...okay, that didn't sound very threatening but you know what i mean. =P I'll track you down and make you write!Author's response
its no problem, i always love them when i get them from you anyways :D thanku! u really didnt have to say that, im havin 2 much fun writin this story!! lol. but for fear of u looking for me, i will keep continue writin! but it might be hard - i live in the uk! hehe (assumin u live in the US)Swear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-02-19
crazy fan girl moment brendon urie in a towel............gazes off into space
snaps back to reality one hell of a filler chapter!!!!!!! :):):)
so sweet!!!!! ):):)Author's response
u are telling me!!! a part of me thinks i wrote that for the people rading this, mostly for me :DDDD thankyou!! im very happy now!Swear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) Frenchie189 2007-02-21
smiles
I love it.
Pete Wentz shows up everywhere. Like, BAM! There he is. LOL.
Update soon please and thank you.Author's response
yay, ur smiling! thanku, i know i say that a lot, but i really mean it! he does, doesnt he?! thats funny, hehe. but he is their manager, i guess. ill try, give me til the weekend? lol, i dont have much time at the mo... stupid school, grrr
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