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48. You Took Me For Granted, Now I'm Changed, You Haven't
10 reviewsin which final exams commence. in which Molly recieves another package.
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Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) melrevolution 2007-02-18
Hey so I've been reading this story and it's really great. I live in the city so I've been picturing it in my head as best I can. Anyways keep it up!Author's response
yay for new reviewers. :) glad you're enjoying the story.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) MMMramen 2007-02-18
Why does Ficwad even bother giving me points? They should just forward them to you and cut out the middle man. Seriously.
I think Molly's going to be OK. Dare I say she's kind of growing up...a little. But I still want her and Patty Cakes to get back together. She is still crazy about him and he's must still care about her or he wouldn't have bothered with her at all. I'm holding out for my happily ever-fucking-after.Author's response
haha. seriously ficwad should be like 'oh bridget updated. there goes one of kyles points'
Molly is going to be ok. eventually. I wouldn't quite say she's growing up YET. and I ain't promising nothing about happily ever fucking after.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) duckapple 2007-02-18
I love you.
Seriously. I can't say that enough.
You amaze me.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-02-18
Die whoever stole your CD. Anyway, I'm oh so glad you spent your time writing these 3. I feel spoiled. Anyway, I loved the CD instead of a letter thing! Very cool. I'm sad with the last line, but I am also satisfied. I'm mixed.Author's response
yea the cd theif sucked monkeys. i keep meaning to re-purchase hard copy...cause i have this thing where i HAVE to have cds.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-19
I freaky deakin love it. I just do.Author's response
well..i freaky deakin love you. so that worksWould You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-02-19
this story is seriously one of the best ive read on here. definatly my favourite at the moment!
i just read through the whole damn thing (which took me two whole days!!)
anywho i love it but i am way too lazy to review each chapter individually so this is it sorry. but i am giving you a rating point :)
update soon!Author's response
thanks!
I'm working on the next chapter as soon as I finish responding to reviews. I'm glad you like the story--that makes me all warm and fuzzy.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-19
Why don't you get yourself a tiara and start sticking my rating points in it?
Patrick is wonderful. Patrick trying to get over her is wonderful and younger Patrick trying to win her back with sex is wonderful.
I can't wait for summer. :)Author's response
hehe. I can't wait for summer either stares at the snow outside...but you meant in the story.
Patrick truly is wonderful. I don't want anyone to hate the trickster so I'm trying to show that he isn't totally at fault, Molly gets blame too.
and my tiara is very shiny with rating points. thank you miss alex.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-02-20
I was contemplating giving up this story for Lent. I seriously check a gazillion times a day to see if you updated, even though I know most of the time you haven't. But then I decided that I simply could not live without it. So I'm giving up my obsession with Rasberry Tea instead. Psh, yeah we'll see how that one works. Anyway...you are the whole reason I even check this site as much as I do. I should yell at you. But I wont. Because it's not your fault you're writing is so amazing...Author's response
speaking as a fellow addict...give up the story before you give up rasberry ANYTHING...but esspecially tea guzzles 3rd snapple of the day
I'm gonna write some more tonight, I'm super burnt after the past 3 days I had BUT I also saw TAI live last night and FINALLY hearing "Skeptics & True Believers" live made me long to write more of this...essp since it suddenly struck me last night just how perfect that song truly is for this story.
AND...I got to meet them. that seriously beat out even possibly ever meeting fall out boy smacks hand--bad bridget 'cause they were chill and Bill and I talked business for like 20 minutes--and then he had to go pee.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) riaryder 2007-02-21
With these 3 updates you are totally spoiling me. And I love you for it.
Consider them all rated.
I have a love/hate thing for Molly. Sometimes I want to slap her. Sometimes I want to cuddle her. I couldn't make up my mind on this one. Until that killer last line. Defo, cuddles.
Heart-breakingly brilliant.
I'm running out of superlatives for you.
So you're just fucking amazing.
That kind of covers it.Author's response
That's kinda how I feel about Molly. I'm very mixed as to who's side I'm on sometimes. That last line might be my favorite in the story so far. 'cause I could picture Molly laying in a bed talking to the person who over the "years" has become probably her best friend in the world just telling him sadly and at the same time accepting that it's "time to let go".
Thanks for the compliment. I think all my readers are pretty fucking amazing themselves.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) xloveorsympathy 2007-02-21
gah i proberly have said this before but.
Holy Flying Purple Ponies Amazing much?
im so serious.
you and your writing make me happy :D
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