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Sweet Revenge
(#) divachick34 2007-02-21
OOOOHHHH! poor Julius what will delilah do?:) please update soonSweet Revenge
(#) divachick34 2007-02-21
OMGOMGOMG poor julius, what will happen next? please update :)Sweet Revenge
(#) panda_1418 2007-02-22
Crud I hate homework. Keeps me from the website.
ANYWAY, THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE! Geeze, I had completely forgotten about this. But now, I can't wait for the next chapter! How cruel, leaving us hanging. Geeze, Darks. Lol.Sweet Revenge
(#) vaiwandil 2007-02-26
very very exciting! please hold your promise and update! I'm dying with suspense!Sweet Revenge
(#) fruit_addict 2007-04-05
Ok good plot but again lots of spelling mistakes and grammer problems. And why would a cave be in the country side? Wouldn't it be in the mountains or in the side of a hill. More discription would help the story alot. And this line contradicts itself. '"That's for me to know, and you to find out," Badger said. "Here. I'll give you the location and everything. Come and get him."' Why would he tell her to find it out when he was giving her the location anyways? Sorry for the crumby reviews but I try to be constructive and brutally honest
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