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Chapter 18
8 reviewsCheyenne makes Gerard happy and Bob overhears a little something that doesn't make him happy
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(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-02-21
fucking awesome!!
I hate Lyn...she WON'T GET HIM BACK!!
lol- Bob thinks he knows...lol :)Author's response
Thank you, I hate Lyn too and Bob is funny but he won't be for long when he kicks Gee's blonde ass Mwah hahahahaha!! Sorry I got carried away.Forbidden
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-02-21
aw! so sweet but saucy!! great chapter. have a rating point dearie! :)Author's response
A rating point yay!!!! Sweet and saucy, don't worry soon it wil be sour just like the chinese sauce is(random I know) Thank for the comment and the rating. See you soon. By the way great story I've fallen way behind on it tho better catch up.Forbidden
(#) McrXRXMyXSavioursX 2007-02-21
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
THAT FUCKIN' LYN!!!!!
SHE SHOULD LEAVE THEM ALONEEEEEEE!!
WOW that was...dirty
love this story :D
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You make me laugh, lots of shouting and then 'wow that was....dirty' lol Thank you for the review much appreciated see you next updateForbidden
(#) haleyxhomicide 2007-02-21
aawwwww that is adorable.
I love her, she is such a sweet person.
mmmhmm
blonde angel hahahahahah ahhahaha ahha
ahemAuthor's response
Thanx for the review and yes Cheyenne is sweet for now.Forbidden
(#) Reign_Madden 2007-02-21
Ok I'm not actually reveiwing my own work I'm testing somethingAuthor's response
Yes you are you bloody liar slaps self.
Seriously tho I'm not reviewing my own stuff or talking to myself shifty eyes.
Honestly people this morning when I checked my reviews I couldn't see them the page was blank so I reviewed my own chapter to see if it would come up and thankfully it did. Do you know how frustrating it is to have reviews and not be able to read them, it's enough to make me burn down my office takes out matches and gasoline from desk draw. Any hoo gotta go I can hear police sirens, that's my cue.Forbidden
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-02-22
aww. i love this story, so sweet yet so dram-dram-drama, you know what i mean? :D
yea, just keep it coming, its great.Author's response
Thank you my lovley. I have a point of looking at the profiles of the people who review my story and I found out you put me in your fave story list that's so sweet gives cookie and muffin. Thanks for the reviews and ratings(if you have) very much appreciated.Forbidden
(#) AlexSanDee 2007-02-22
Oh my God can you write hot sex or what. This whole chaper was excellent. Everything about it was just perfect. The hatred I'm feeling for Lynn is growing by leaps and bounds. The note she wrote Gee was such a nice touch. OK I will stop gushing now. Keep up the excellent work!!Author's response
Hot sex? I'm just tryna keep up with you. The hatred will be overwhelming soon, but I can't say too much. Thanks for reviewing
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