Xander once had a gift, and a curse. He rejoiced when it ended, but now it's come back... One-shot.
(#) tjin 2007-02-22
Wow. That was awesome. I think you should write a sequal. But thats up to you. Or maybe his friends' reactions...'Of course you see dead people...look at Spike!'. Well, not necesarilly(?)that but, something. Or not. But anyway, it was cool.
Interesting idea, buy you need to work a bit on the flow of the story; it seemed a bit chopped up, like you were just trying to get your idea down without framing it properly; don't get me wrong, it is a very interesting idea, but you need to transition a bit cleaner between the old thoughts and the current moods and actions. Overall, good work.
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