- A pretty clever twist, and nicely led up to, although I would have liked a little more information on why, especially if this starts early enough that Gary doesn't know about it.
Author's responseYeah, that's something I hadn't thought up. I've seen the "Ash is a girl"/"Gary is a Girl" cliche done to death before, but I wanted to try my hand at it, but I didn't really think it through. Then again, most OMGAGIRL stuff involves shishi and no real thought, so I would like to think that my subtle omission is somewhat tasteful.
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