(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-02-22Yay!!! jumps up and down while laughing and feels mighty special
You used my line!!! :) That's awesome!
But goodness that was a good chapter! So Sara is really in love with mikes?
grr! she IS nuts! And I betcha she raped him! I bet she did! pouts that whore....
retrieves newly sharpened pencil of death
Author's responseoh shit sorry, i meant to mention you at the bottom of the page...i'll go back and change it! (it's genius) hm...maybe she did, maybe she didn't......lol- that pencil of death.......! Yeah, she loves Mikey, or does she?-lol :)
(#) lady_venom_x 2007-02-22I love it.
And you did an awesome job on developing Sara. I love to hate her. :)
How do you write such awesome material? I'm so stuck on mine.
Author's responselol-She's a really fun character to write :). The thing is, i don't think the stuff i write is awesome (but it means so much that you do-thank you!!!) so it'll be the same for you. Your story so far is really well written and i love it, everytime i read your summary i atually go "woah....". It'll just be writers block- which i hope goes soon, i wanna know more about Bob!! :) Thanks for the review :)
- Wow...I feel sorry for:
Sarach- because Ithink she maybe mentally ill.
Mikey- Cos of Sarah
Gerard- Cos of Sarah
Ray- Because of hearing mikey and mystery woman (Sarah)
Sally - Because of being attacked by gerard and being related to Sarah.
Yeah, i think that's it. (M4PM)
Author's responseYou think Sara's mentally ill?....hm, interesting! (M4PM) oooh, i'm almost finished the next chapter for that!!!! :):):):)
(#) xifellintoxfantasyx 2007-02-23ok if i were mikey i would smack that bitch down to size and deal with grerard. lol anyway wonderful chapter cant wait for more!!!!!
Author's responselol- yeah, i would too!!! :) I'm happy you're anjoying it :):):):) Thank you for the review :)
(#) DemolitionLuvars 2007-03-29this goes perfectly with your story:
And you can't touch my brother and you can't keep my friends This time I mean it Well I hope I'm not mistaken by the news I heard from waking
and it's hard to say I'm shaken, by the choices that I make
and well I find it hard to stay, with the words you say
And you can cry all you want to, I don't care how much And you can't keep my brother, and you won't fuck my friends
Honey this mirro... MCR...
Author's responselol- it does, doesn't it? I was actually listening to that album as i started writing it too, hm...lol :):):)
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