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• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-23

  I. Love. You. Seriously. This chapter was simply marvelous. Especially the end: LOVED the last three lines or so- how she didn't even try to hide it. Oh well, I guess it WOULD be pointless when caught in that sort of position.
  
  Anyway, Joe's reaction to seeing that sort of house/wealth was so genuine. I think we'd all feel a little intimidated if the person we were dating took us home to that without any sort of warning.
  
  Ok, it was all full of excitment, so I rated as such. Update soon! I can't wait to see how she'll talk her way out of this one... or, I guess poll dance her way out. Whatever. ;)

  Author's response

  Yes a strategically placed pole may be the only way out of this little spot. I'm sure that would make her father happier too.....haha.
  Thank you buckets for your wonderful reviews xx

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) ako215 2007-02-23

  great chapter..there really needs to be more joe stories on here! update soon!

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) lclutebark 2007-02-23

  O.O
  
  OMG!!
  I gasped at the end...seriously!

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) watch_the_sky 2007-02-23

  i love her nonchalant holiday greeting

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-23

  I stand corrected (by myself): Hot overrules funny.
  
  Ha ha ha. That was wonderful. Funny and sexy. I love Megan, by the way. Trade you Brenda for Megan? No??? You must be kidding...
  
  This story is one of the best ones ever. Can I move to Rianna world?

  Author's response

  There are regular flights via RiannaAir ;-)

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) ZippersOverYou 2007-02-23

  ooooh i see some sparks about to fly...great chapter...update soon for this poor boyfriend deprived joe-loving soul

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) Frenchie189 2007-02-23

  Haha, her Dad walked in. I would do the exact same thing, well I would cover up though. LOL.
  
  I love it, please update soon.

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) LOVELA 2007-02-23

  Now that was classic. I'm still giggling.

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) xp0lkad0tx 2007-02-23

  Oh. Snap!
  Just what every father wants to see!
  Ha ha.
  Gah. I just can't get enough
  of your writing! It is so well done!
  I wish I could think of more stuff to
  say!
  I know. Update Update Update

  Author's response

  I love that you back review. That brings a smile to my face. And so do your kind words. Thank you x a million

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) patrickdance4me 2007-02-24

  oh shit.
  poor joe haha.
  that sucks.

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