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• Canine Cupid

  (#) riaryder 2007-02-23

  Oh, I could feel the cringyness (I think that's only a word in Rianna world, but hey ) of the conversation between Joe and Carl. That has got to suck
  And Pete offering advice on women? HA.
  Poor mixed up Joefro. He should stick with Dax. :-)

  Author's response

  I think I also have cringyness in my hair. Or my hair is cringyness. (Why am I always poking fun at Pete when I worry about my hair a lot more? What a hypocrite I am. I think I am jealous of his nice hair. And the fact that he can hang out with the Stumpster.)
  Thanks for your nice reviews all the time! :)

• Canine Cupid

  (#) LOVELA 2007-02-23

  Dirty's breath...gross.
  
  Otherwise, great chapter, again! Poor Joe is going through some tough stuff and I like how you put it all into perspective for the reader.
  Oh, and I bet Dax misses him too! Poor puppy.
  Smooches!!

  Author's response

  Thank you for the encouragement. Gives me ressurance, especially if it comes from the Drama-Mama. (A new one! ;)
  Of course, Dax does! There's nothing like hiding his cute puppy paws in the huuuuuuuuuuge fro!

• Canine Cupid

  (#) Amaranthea 2007-02-24

  Ah, drama. You do it bestest, FG. Heartache! Misunderstandings! Tummy scratching!
  
  Of course, another great chapter. Take a point.

  Author's response

  Thank you for the compliment. I still feel more at home in the comedy branch but usually a story needs a plot... and that's when FG tries to fumble around with drama.
  I'm glad you're still reading and reviewing my dog poop! :)

• Canine Cupid

  (#) patrickdance4me 2007-02-24

  omg my computer messed up while i was giving a review and i dont wanna type it all again :[ lol how bout a good job in its place? :] update soon

  Author's response

  Thank you, dancy Patrick! :)

• Canine Cupid

  (#) luckysgc921 2007-02-24

  uhh...how did I miss two updates? blink
  anyway..LOVED both chapters. LOVE Carl. a lot. hugs Carl Love that Joey feels bad even though it's not his fault. Oh and best line ever. "Wrong Stress. I don't need YOUR advice on women" hehe.
  loves it. loves you.

  Author's response

  I love you, too. hugs you

• Canine Cupid

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-03-04

  God, finally time to sit back and read this with intent! here goes....
  
  The whole convo between Joe and Carl was so horribly awkward and realistic. How the hell would you talk to someone when that had happened between them...I admire you for writing Joe so perfectly flawed. I was cringing for him....I felt so bad for Carl.
  
  Then the scene with him on the bus with Pete, that was funny, for some reason, you slipping in the line about him playing with his bangs and asking about a new haircut just had me for a while. I giggled like a dork.
  
  anyways, I'm off to review your other chapters.
  
  Sorry as always for being a tardy wife....

  Author's response

  I just can't ever give Pete credit for anything other than his emolicious hair. And I call myself a fan...
  Thank you for your thoughts. Always appreciated.

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