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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Black_s_Phoenix 2007-02-25
I'm waiting for Harry to push back and say that he insists on paying as they are mates and what is his money is hers.
Also hoping taht it will speed up in getting to Hogwarts.The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Shaggy37 2007-02-25
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I was kinda hoping that Harry would buy all the parts to make himself a staff that would be so cool. I can't wait to see what happens next. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-26
This was an interesting chapter. I'm curious on whether or not you intend to come back to this story later for a staff, as it would seem to be a logical set up. How many more chapters before they head back to Hogwarts is my nxt question. This is a really compelling story and I'm glad that you are continuing to bring new light and twists to it. Please continue and let me know.The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) apocalypso 2007-02-27
Excellent stuff. The only thing I could ask you for is more romance between Harry and Fleur...like more scenes that involve just the two of them. You write romance really well, so I hope to see more of it :)
Good luck writing.
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