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  (#) jabarber69 2007-02-25

  Interesting story and well written but I'm still a little confused about the diary. Is it really Harry's and if so then why does it have to do with I guess voldie's rebirth? oh well guess we'll just have to wait and see!

  Author's response

  Wait and see indeed! :p

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  (#) Cateagle 2007-02-25

  Hmm, you do have to wonder just how much of himself Harry put into that diary. Of course, it could be that finding it and then reading it and using the spells it contained was/is enough to select one as the next Dark Lord slayer. I can think of alternative possibilities, though, and I'll be interested in seeing which way you take this story.

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  (#) Cateagle 2007-02-25

  Hmm, you do have to wonder just how much of himself Harry put into that diary. Of course, it could be that finding it and then reading it and using the spells it contained was/is enough to select one as the next Dark Lord slayer. I can think of alternative possibilities, though, and I'll be interested in seeing which way you take this story.

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  (#) Krull 2007-02-25

  You can either make it or brake it at this point, depending on what decitions you make, or have made.
  
  Based on the evidence so far(the cover up, the "special" powers of the diary, little bits and pieces here and there and my own gut inscinct) I'm tempted to say that Harry's the sorce of the Dark Magic...

  Author's response

  And which turn of events would make it for you, and which break it?

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  (#) SiriusStains 2007-03-21

  This can go eitehr way in my opinion, two chapters really isn't enough for me to know if i like it or not. I can tell you that i would like to read more as of right now though. I usually don't like stories where all of the characters are OC..i do like taht you have not made everyone's names similar to HP cannon characters..i hate stories that are set so far in teh future where everyones last name is potter or weasley or malfoy or zambini...it makes sense that many of these lines would have died out..

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