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Florin's Defence

by fruit_addict 2 reviews

Florin is under attack and this time it is Westley's responsibility. I edited out the movie quotes and cleaned up the writing a bit. Still a work in progress.

Category: Princess Bride - Rating: PG - Genres: Fantasy - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2007-02-25 - Updated: 2012-08-05 - 440 words

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Florin's Defence

(#) random_c 2008-12-29

It's spelt "Florin"
Author's response
For goodness' sake it is. Thank you.
Florin's Defence

(#) stargate-lover 2011-08-20

I like the bigining so far but i would start getting away from quoting the movie. If your going to contiue the story :)

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