- This chappie made my brain swim. Might our Molly be bi-polar? I remember her taking some Xanax, which is used for anxiety sometimes. When people who are bi-polar take meds like that, it can make their behavior worse...or something like that. Just a guess. Anyway, I'm proud of Patrick, for controlling himself. I know how tempting exes can be...uh...what? Um...point.
Author's response...la la la...I'm not saying nothing about Molly's state of mind quite yet.
but yea, Patrick controlled himself...barely. lol In my brain Patrick wanted to jump her bones as badly as she wanted to jump his, but he's also being selfish and really doesn't want to get hurt by her again. so its not really him being noble or anything.
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-26I was going to compliment Patrick on his constraint... but then I read your answer to Kyle's review. ;) So now, I don't know what to make of that guy.
Kudos to you for presenting Molly like that. I'm buying every syllable of it.
Author's responselol yea Patrick's still a boy. I do my best to turn him into a real boy in this instead of fluffy bunny Patrick.
- My my hasn't Patrick become the grown up.
This was a great chapter. As desperately as I want them to get back together, I didn't want it like that. I like them both too much.
And by the way, I love the new bold Shaun, telling her like it is!
Have some of my shiny new points xx
Author's responseeverything will work out the way its supposed to work out eventually...
admittedly I'm not saying how its supposed to work out.
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