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Follows " Enough Room For Two " Patrick & Shay's marriage is in a less than ideal condition. WRITTEN WITH CCLOVELA
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Learning to Love Again
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-02-21
i loved the first one and now i think i'm in love the second one - keep up the amazing work.
xxxxxoAuthor's response
Thank as always for being a faithful reviewer, I feel the same about your writing too. :)Learning to Love Again
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-21
This is so different! I really love how you show the family dynamics- the dad working while the mom takes care of the home. I noticed when Patrick was mentioning the issues they had: kids, MY job, MY band. What about his wife's stuff? Anyway, I really like where you are going with this... full of ambiance and stuff. ;)Author's response
Awesome, you're such a dude.Learning to Love Again
(#) riaryder 2007-02-21
SEQUEL!! SQUEEL!! They're not the same letters for nothing.
But aw, sadness. I want them to be Mr and Mrs perfect couple. Reality check?
You two are great. I am so excited.
Great opening chapter. Update SOON!
I promise to stop using CAPITALS if you do :-)
Have apoint.Author's response
I love you.Learning to Love Again
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-21
Silence. It bothers most people. It's human nature to squirm in silence. It took her years to be able to accept silence in her office, but now that she does, she basks in it. Silence allows people to think. Silence allows them to accept. Silence allows them to talk. -> Thank you for that. I tend to forget. :)
Katy...
1) I think the choice of narrator is perfect. ;)
2) Perfect chapter title.
3) Amazing description of the home life of the Stumps. (Wow, that name sounds even funnier when used in plural.) The kids, the situations: so real.
4) I love the way Sue notes down what she sees. (Kudos to Cece perhaps?)
This looks like a grand undertaking to me and if there's somebody who is fit for that, it's Britain. I have faith and expectations and both will be fulfilled.
With a cherry point on top. :)Author's response
CeCe wrote that, it's amazing huh? But I'm taking kudos for numero vierLearning to Love Again
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-02-21
i haven't read this yet. but i'm printing it out right now along with Addict, Cloak & Dagger, Canine Cupid, The Curse of Curls, I Am Patrick Stumps Twin...etc.
I love you. Both of you. I'll be back with a list. i promise.Author's response
We want lists.....or you're out.Learning to Love Again
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-21
Silly. Katy. 5 Points already. Jeez. Go lick the sun.Author's response
I'm on it....just waiting an an em on an ec.....an eclipseLearning to Love Again
(#) MMMramen 2007-02-21
My goodness, Katy. I missed this story and these characters. I love where you're taking this plot. Happily ever afters are so overrated...though I long for them. Great start, lovely.Author's response
why thank you my little .....sniggers KY Jelly! hahaha slaps hand over mouth I'm so prude, look at me.Learning to Love Again
(#) jessiearei 2007-02-23
You're an amazing writer!
I absolutely loved Enough Room for Two.
and this is starting out great!
Update again soon please!Author's response
Thank you, what a sweetheart....Learning to Love Again
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-26
UPDATE! cracks whip
... um, Bart? No, that wasn't meant for you... (well-trained)Author's response
Good Bart! Good Good Bart! pats his head
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